Edits

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Tips for NewsHounds
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Explanations of some common errors and confusing highlighted comments Pease may put in your stories.

• slug every story at the top like this:
Fire (topic)
Pease (your name)

• DON’T write broadcast news leads. Like this: “Fire strikes a home in Logan….” That’s barely English. Write complete sentences in past tense: “A Logan home burned to the ground Tuesday night…..”

• ¶ One sentence/idea per paragraph (see my versions for examples)

• Use surname only after first reference (Joy Ferguson becomes Ferguson, not Joy.)

• No honorific titles: no Mr./Mrs./Ms. (except in stories where there are two or more people of the same name, but try to avoid it even then). No “Professor Andersen”

• No names of unknown people in lead (Floyd Finger). If you tell Fred that Floyd Finger was arrested, what will he respond? (“Who?”). So refer to such people in descriptive terms first, and by name in the second paragraph. See my version of the Andersen fire story of the Finger-Mommish crash for examples. (Exception: feature stories can start with unknown people—the goal is to pique the reader’s curiosity.)

• Don’t Overwrite!!! Keep it simple. See Safire’s writing tips: URL

• Attrib=use attribution. You MUST cite a source for ALL statements of fact (except “The sky is blue.”) When you report that Mommish has gone to the hospital, use “police said.” When you say the cause of the Andersens’ fire was electrical, cite the source (asst. fire chief).

• AP = AP error. Look it up.

• ASK = this is wrong. ASK me why if you can’t figure out why I’ve highlighted. (which should be easy when you compare to my versions)

• NEVER start a story with WHEN element. WHEN doesn’t matter until you know WHAT. So, “Tuesday night so-and-so spoke” is backward; write, “A prominent so-and-so told audiences Tuesday night….”

• SP*! = Spelling Error.

• AWK! or SYN = awkward construction/syntax

• FE! = Fact Error! You’re Fired!

• punct! Punctuation error. (NOTE: no semi colons, punctuation ALWAYS inside quotes…)

• When to hyphenate: Use hyphens to connect words that together modify/describe another word(s). For example, there’s no hyphen when you say the boy is 4 years old, but hyphenate 4-year-old boy, because “4-year-old” goes together to modify “boy.” NO: a six car wreck; YES: a six-car wreck. NO: a Pulitzer Prize winning editor; YES: a Pulitzer Prize-winning editor. NO: a hand me down; YES: a hand-me-down (in this case, the WHAT? is implied by the context, so the whole thing is a “hand-me-down” or you speak of a “hand-me-down sweater,” where “sweater” is modified by “hand-me-down.” Get it?

• Past/Present: Most news you will report will have already taken place, right? So use past tense in most circumstances (said, not says—unless it is something the source ALWAYS believes). There are exceptions.

• Avoid 1st (I/We) and 2nd person (you). First-person places you, the reporter, in the story; second-person sounds like you’re talking at the reader, which can be annoying. Exceptions: 1st person OK for experience stories—like what it felt to be caught in an avalanche. 2nd person OK for how-to stories—like how to housetrain a puppy…

• Rept: Repetitive—tighten.

• SDT. Show, Don’t Tell. Don’t tell the reader that it was a wonderful speech—you have to show it through your selection of facts, quotes, etc. Ex: NO: The speech was well received… YES: The student audience interrupted the speaker several times with applause and laughter…

• AVOID the “city council met…” lead—the blah-nothing “an event happened” lead, and tell the reader what happened, which will imply a meeting or a speech or an accident. Ex: NO: The Smithfield City Council met Tuesday…. YES: The Smithfield City Council voted 4-1 Tuesday…. NO: A Pulitzer Prize-winning journalist and editor spoke Monday…. YES: A Pulitzer Prize-winning journalist and editor told students Monday that there is no greater joy than writing…. NO: There was an accident Wednesday at the corner of Main Street and 300 South… YES: A Main Street crash killed a 30-year-old Logan plumber Wednesday …. In all these cases, the NO leads are correct, but boring and a slow start to get to the “So what?”; the YES versions imply the meeting/speech/accident while giving the reader more information. Get it?

More tips to follow…..

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Shorts—Keep Writing, NewsHounds!

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Write On, NewsDawgs!

You know the old joke about Carnegie Hall?

The interviewer asked the violinist, “Tell me, maestro, how did you get to Carnegie Hall?”

The musician considered and replied, “Practice, practice, practice.”

That’s your job now. The more you write, the better you’ll get at the basic inverted pyramid. Faster, too. So below I am posting batches of fact sheets for news stories. In addition to the weekly assignments, try to write one batch each week and send them to me on your own schedule. I will accept and grade these newswriting assignments through the last day of the semester (Dec. 4).

In addition, everyone should do at least one more speech story—either a live speech that you cover (clear with me ahead of time) or one of those I've dug up below with transcripts and/or video links. For these old speeches, I trust you will do the story without Googling it to see how the pro’s did it (!).

• Shorts4

• Shorts5

• Shorts6

• Speeches (500 words): Obama to students (Sept. 8, 2009); Bush Address on Economy (Sept. 24, 2008); Obama Inauguration (Jan. 21, 2009) video/text;

More to come.

From Fred to Michelangelo

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The Parable of Michelangelo’s David

The lesson of the “Fred Rule,” as you know, is that you can get your message across most easily—in a conversation or in a news story—if you can identify the single most important thing that’s happening: “I was in a car wreck!” “I got an A on my exam!” “Those so-and-so’s are going to raise our taxes again!!”

These aren’t news story leads, of course, but they telegraph the most important news. Your job as the writer is to expand that nugget into the appropriate form and add the necessary additional information and background and corroboration. Right?

Add to Fred the famous statue of David, by Michelangelo. How the heck, you might wonder, did Michelangelo change a block of featureless marble into something that not only looks like David, but sings David?

You can find that story by clicking here for The Parable of Michelangelo’s David. What does this statue have to do with newswriting? Well, see if you can figure it out. Gold star for the first to email me with the answer.
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Nut Grafs

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A story’s “nut graf” is a kind of summary, but different from the lead. The lead attracts reader attention with the most immediate, important news. The “nut graf,” which usually appears as about the fourth graf of a story, between the summary lead grafs and the body of the story, answers the reader’s “So what?” or “What is this about?” questions. If the lead is the story’s roadsign, the “nut graf” adds more specifics to the story’s roadmap.

Go to these URL’s for more on nut grafs:
• Leads, Quotes and Nut Grafs, Oh my!
• Writing—More on Nut Grafs

Gartner Speech

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Covering Speeches; Getting the ‘Nut’

Covering speeches is something that all journalists do all the time. In some ways, it is the easiest possible assignment—all you have to do is sit and listen and take notes; the speaker does the work and hands you quotes and quips and facts and opinions.

The difficult part is transforming a speech, which has a particular structure and form, into the kind of inverted pyramid news story that we’ve been working on. The inverted pyramid is useful for the reader, as you know, because it provides a selective, quasi-telegraphic account of news in decreasing order of importance—first things, first.

For the reporter, translating events and even a speech into that kind of user-friendly structure requires judgment and discipline. First, the reporter must decide what the most important fact(s) or theme is—in the short story about the car accident from a couple of weeks ago, which of the facts was the most important? Sure, the accident itself, but was it Floyd Finger’s arrest for DUI, or was it Marcie Mommish’s injury, which sent her to the hospital? Or both?

This judgment of what’s most important, and then the skill to write it in a way that focuses the reader and story on that element—that’s the trick we’re trying to learn.

A speech, however, is not structured so conveniently. Most speakers start with a couple of jokes, ease into their topic, build to a couple of crescendos (the main points), and then taper off at the end. So instead of an upside-down triangle (pyramid), a speech might look like a diamond shape, or a figure eight.

So the challenge in covering a speech is to figure out a major theme on which to focus your news story. Can you describe it in one word, or a few works? (Remember the Fred story—the city council meeting boiled down to this: “Those jerks are going to raise taxes again.” Or even one word: “Taxes!”)

This boiling down process is important. It requires thought and imagination. As Michael Gartner said, the reporter has to be fair as well, so the story must reflect accurately and fairly what the speaker was trying to say. You have to find what we refer to as a “hook” on which you can hang the whole story. If you don’t find a good focal point, the rest of your story either won’t hold together logically, or you’ll run out of stuff and report only a small portion of the whole story.

Here is a structure for inverted pyramid news stories that I think is very useful, and can work for you (nearly) every time.

• 1st¶ Summarize the most important/central news in one sentence. Sometimes, you can identify this in your head in one word—“Taxes!”—and then add the other required lead stuff (who, when, where?) to make a summary sentence.
• 2nd¶ Support the lead paragraph with other critical info. For example, a person’s name often would NOT go in the first ¶, because most people aren’t household names. Sure, you can lead with, “President Obama said today...,” but you can’t say, “Floyd Finger was arrested....,” because no one knows who the heck he is. So the first reference to the person might refer to her/him as a label—a Logan city councilman, a USU professor, a Salt Lake City man, etc., and then name the person in the second graf.
• 3rd¶ If you can, find a good quote that supports your lead.
• 4th¶ The “nut graf.” I’ll give you some readings on nut grafs, but basically, this is a paragraph that answers the “So what?” or the “What is this about?” question.

These top paragraphs represent the story’s roadsign, telling the reader what the story is about and where it’s going. If you can boil your notes down to this, the rest of the story can proceed logically, filling out the major points of the story and taking the reader along an easy trail that was marked by the lead “roadsign.”

(For more on nut grafs and how to focus a story, see new posts on NewsHounds on Nut Grafs and on “Michelangelo’s David.”)

Here is my version of the Michael Gartner speech story. Let me acknowledge that this is kind of a hard story to write, because it’s more a lecture than a speech with good news “hooks” on which to hang the story. But it is still possible to come up with a central theme that can help hold the whole thing together, without simply listing Gartner’s 12 points—which then reads like a transcript, not a news story.

Compare my version below to your own, and a feel free to kibbitz. I include a few notes highlighted in the text, FYI.

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Gartner Speech
Pease (Note: This is how you should slug ALL stories!)

One of America’s preeminent journalists told USU students Tuesday that although modern journalism has never been more challenging, reporting is also “enormous fun.” (This is what I came up with as a summary “hook” that includes his main theme and permits me the flexibility to cover as much of his tralk as I want. Note that I don’t name Gartner in the lead—does everyone know who he is? but I refer to him as an important journalist.)

“Who else in the world is paid just to ask questions, to think and to write?” said Michael Gartner, a former TV and newspaper editor and Pulitzer Prize-winner. “There simply is nothing more satisfying, nothing more fun.” (This second graf does two things—specific ID of Gartner, and a quote that gives the reader the “sound” of the speaker.)

Gartner, who was president of NBC News, editor at The Wall Street Journal, USA Today and The Des Moines Register, and co-owner and editor of the Ames (Iowa) Tribune, offered a crowd of nearly 200 students and faculty at the Memorial Union his “12-Step Program to Good Writing.”

Gartner was on campus as part of the university’s William Henry Fox First Amendment Lecture Series, sponsored by the Journalism and Communication Department. (These 2 grafs serve as the “nut,” which tells the reader what this story is about and whys/he should care.)

“Gartner is a national treasure,” said journalism Dean Eaton X. Benedict.

But writing isn’t always fun, said the retired editor, whose editorials for the Ames Tribune won him the Pulitzer Prize in 1997. “Sometimes, it’s painful. Sometimes, it’s frustrating. Sometimes, it’s embarrassing,” Gartner said. (This graf takes the reader back to the lead angle, or “hook,” and continues the conversation into his 12 points. Not the “But,” which is a quick and easy and effective was to make a transition into new material or a different direction.)

And it is a craft that never stops developing, he said, offering a 12-point list of what it takes to be a good writer.

Among Gartner’s 12 suggestions was advice for young writers at every stage of their careers, including life lessons such as the need to have passion, curiosity and care for other human beings. (This is a synthesis of the entire speech—my own interpretation. Rather than just list his 12 points in chronological order, which is Boooorrrrring, I try to find ways to lump stuff together logically.)

Because of changing expectations of journalism and society, the challenge is some ways greater for journalists today than when he was starting, Gartner said. “Today, for you to get into the brains of my children—and of me and my father,” he said, “you must report more thoroughly than ever and write more gracefully than ever.” (Note: A speech story is all about a person talking, so try to select as many good, tight, pithy quotes as possible so the reader can “hear” the speaker’s voice.)

His advice? “You must report. Read. Listen. Simplify. Collaborate. Trust. Experiment. Talk. Pounce. Care. And balance.” (This quote lists his points, but it’s confusing to the reader. So I go quickly into an explanation in the next graf.)

All writing depends on reporting, Gartner said. “Words alone aren’t enough. Good writing needs fact. You cannot be a good writer if you are not a good reporter.” So the first challenge of good writing is collecting good facts.

Equally important, he said, is the ability to listen—both to sources and coworkers, and to the written word. “You cannot be a good writer if you don’t read,” he said. And, “You cannot be a good writer if you don’t listen.” (Note that in many of these paragraphs, I try to make a smooth, logical transition from one topic to the next, and paraphrase material to set up a quote.)

Listening goes both ways, Gartner said. Good writers also have to listen to their writing, and simplify complex ideas, concepts and sentences. “The easiest thing for the reader to do is quit reading,” one of Gartner’s first editors told him.

“What wonderful advice to a newspaperman,” he said. “You have to keep the reader interested.” (This quote follows on the previous graf—completing the thought.)

One way that Gartner suggests for keeping the reader connected is to use editors and co-workers as trusted collaborators. Talking to co-workers and bouncing ideas and stories off each other is an essential way both to improve stories and writing, he said, and can also serve as a reality check.

“Trust means honesty and respect, openness and courtesy” with editors and other reporters to fine-tune stories and find the “music” that makes the difference between facts and good writing.

In addition, Gartner said, the journalist must listen both to his or her own writing “voice,” as well as to sources for great quotes. “The good writer knows how to use quotes,” he said—as punctuation, transition or reinforcement. “It takes a good ear to get a good quote” and to use it effectively.

Finally, Gartner said the best writers and reporters must care deeply about their craft, and about other people.

“You cannot be a good writer if you do not love writing and love reporting. It’s simply impossible,” he said. “And you cannot be a good writer if you do not care what you are writing about.”

Part of that is to care enough to be fair, he said. (That is a transition from the previous graf to this one.) “Fairness is vital for every story and every newspaper, because an unfair story hurts the credibility of the reporter and the editor and the newspaper.”

Gartner’s audience, mostly journalism students, responded often with laughter and applause to the veteran editor’s advice. “This is the kind of stuff you never read in textbooks,” said junior journalism major Forrest Ranger.

As part of the event, Gartner was awarded the journalism school’s annual William Henry Fox Prize for distinguished journalism. The next speaker in the series, former NBC News anchor Tom Brokaw, will be on campus next month.

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A Truthiness Tour de Force

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Now THAT’s Truthiness!

All:

FYI: A great “Truthiness/Truth” project by a team in Brenda Cooper’s Media Smarts class examining how the media frame the illegal immigration debate, and incorporating constitutional precepts, mass communication theories, journalistic ethics codes, and reporting by the news media. The assignment—in the context of the central Smarts question, “How do we know what we think we know about the world?”—asks students to take a controversial topic and find out how the media frame the debate, and then to fact-check using PolitiFact and other nonpartisan fact-checking organizations.

Among the mass communication theories the students used to evaluate media performance in this case: framing, agenda-setting, cultivation. What I like about this kind of project—an this team’s effort in particular--is that it requires research, fact-checking, evaluation and critical thinking, sense-making and synthesis, and incorporation of a wide range of theoretical and real-world issues, presented persuasively with evidence in an effective package. Very nice work. We will post it as well to the JCOM website.

The team—Pizza Feasters United—created a 16-minute multimedia video, which has been posted in two parts to YouTube. Team members: Ryan Parkinson (filmmaker), Angelica Drumm, Kellen Knowles, Teresa Nield, and Torie Welsh.

The video is too long for YouTube, so it’s posted there in two parts:
Part 1
Part 2

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Shorts Wk 6 FIXT

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Pease’s Versions of WRITE!

Compare these versions with the ones you did, which I’ve marked up and returned to you. The marked-up versions include highlighted items that are either wrong or weird or somehow a problem. If after you’ve compared yours with mine you can’t figure out what the highlight problem was—or if I marked ASK on your copy—ask.

Here are notes you’ve taken for stories. Organize them into inverted pyramid style, starting with a summary lead, and write complete stories for a new audience conforming to AP style (assume the events were last night, so refer to the day...). DUE THURSDAY 10/2

NOTES: Fire
Fire in a house. Address: 176 West 500 North, Logan, Utah, North America, Earth
10 p.m. . Two fire trucks from LFD, 12 firefighters, including two both named “Jared.” One of the firetrucks was green. Go figger. House owned by Mary and Frederick Andersen. Mary date of birth (dob) 6/25/57. Fred dob is 11/12/56. Fred is a businessman. He has nice clothes. He owns the dry cleaner shop near Albertson's. Wait. He used to own it, until one of his employees sued him. Remember that? Wow. Mary is a French Professor on tenure track with a state language grant at USU. Your Source: Steve Howard. He's Assistant Fire Chief. “The house is a total loss.” Apparent cause is electrical. Gutted the 3-bdrm house. Just two blocks off Main Street. Near the Old folks home. The wife was on the street afterwards, crying in French: “Tout ma vie! Mes trésors, mes étudiants—tous leurs choses!! Et Charlemagne! Mon pauvre chat, le cheri, il est perdu!” (“My whole life! My treasures, my students—all their things!! And Charlemange! My poor cat, the sweet thing, he is lost!”) Turns out the main thing is that the cat died. And all the final exams of her 215 students. So she'll have to give them the test again. Dommage! And the cat‘s name—Charli-mange….get it?!?!

Some of you are making this too complicated. Remember the Fred Rule—what happened? First things first. In this case, a house burned down. No injuries, but the cat died. Here’s a STRAIGHT inverted pyramid story—not as exciting as some of your versions, but this eliminates the extra stuff and red herring distractions. Dull, maybe, but efficient!

Remember, slug each story like this.....

Fire
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Fire gutted a house near downtown Logan (Tuesday) night, leaving its owners homeless.

The home of Frederick and Mary Andersen at 176 W. 500 North was “a total loss,” said Assistant Fire Chief Steve Howard.

Howard said two fire trucks and 12 firefighters responded to the 10 p.m. blaze, which he said was apparently caused by an electrical malfunction.

Mrs. Andersen wept on the street as firefighters worked, mourning the death of her cat, Charlemange, and final exams of her 215 at USU, where she is a French professor. (Note: this last graf isn’t necessary, strictly speaking, although the cat and the exams add human interest.)

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What else would you like to know? I dunno--$$$ loss estimate? Any other details from firefighters (NOT firemen!)?

NOTES: City Council mtg
Smithfield City Council met from 7-10:30 p.m. Monday night. Of the 12 agenda items, 3 were tabled until next week. Council discussed a proposal to strengthen dog leash law. Council member Joy Ferguson wants dogs euthanized if caught off leashes off owner’s property. Says “Packs of wild dogs are running rampant in town, terrorizing people and putting children at risk.” Lee Austin is Cache Valley Humane Society President. He addressed the council, along with County Animal Control Officer Rex Toothsome. Austin said there are actually fewer dogs countywide and in Smithfield than at this time last year. Toothsome agreed, and offered a chart with numbers for the County and several cities. He said that the County has issued 12,598 dog licenses in 2006. 782 of those were in Smithfield, compared to 14,115 last year (county) and 861 in Smithfield. He also said there were only half as many strays picked up in Smithfield this year (38, compared to about 70 last year). The dog debate lasted more than an hour. Smithfield mayor Clyde Spineless finally called for a vote on Ferguson’s proposal. It was defeated by a vote of four to one. After the meeting, Spineless said he was pleased. “Smithfield is still a pet-friendly town.”

Some of you got completely bogged down by the numbers. Do we NEED all those numbers? Who would read them? Here’s what I would tell Fred: “Some crazy councilwoman in Smithfield wants to have stray dogs murdered!!” The news is that the council voted it down, then there are too good quotes and a little background info on dogs… Does that make sense? Check out my version. Can you ID the WWWWWH? Can you see/explain why I put stuff where I did?

City Council
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After an hour-long discussion, the Smithfield City Council voted down a councilmember’s proposal Monday to euthanize stray dogs that are caught off their owner’s property.

“Smithfield is still a pet-friendly town,” declared Mayor Clyde Spineless after the 4-to-1 vote.
Councilmember Joy Ferguson offered the euthanasia measure as the Council debated proposals to strengthen Smithfield’s leash law.

“Packs of wild dogs are running rampant in town, terrorizing people and putting children at risk,” Ferguson said, calling for strays to be put down when caught.

But Lee Austin, president of the Cache Valley Human Society, and county animal control officer Rex Toothsome told the Council that the number of stray dogs in Smithfield and countywide is down from last year.

Toothsome also said that only about half as many stray dogs—38—were picked up in Smithfield in 2008, as compared to 2007.

He said the county issued 782 dog licenses in Smithfield during 2008, and that 12,598 had been issued countywide, down from the year before.

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NOTES: Crash (all info from “police spokesman”)
Car crash in south Logan on morning. S. Main & 300 South at traffic light. Blue 1999 Toyota driven by Floyd Finger, dob 3/12/77, 1515 W. 1000 N., Apt. 21, collided with Brown 1972 Chevy pickup driven by Marcie Mommish, dob 8/18/87, 253 Aggie Village #12. Mommish vehicle was making righthand turn at the light when struck by Toyota in the driver-side door. Mommish had green light. EMTs treated driver of the pickup at the scene, and she was transported to LRH with head trauma. Finger was cited for running the red light and arrested for DUI after officers detected the smell of alcohol. Several empty beer cans were found in the Toyota. Mommish is a practicing wiccan. Finger is Presbyterian but never goes to church. He has six fingers on his left hand. Mommish likes her new chainsaw.

What happened? What are the key elements? Crash, or injury, or DUI? Which element do you think is most important? Which one(s) did I think were most important?

Crash
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A 31-year-old Logan man was arrested for drunken driving Monday morning following a collision on South Main Street that sent the 21-year-old driver of a second vehicle to the hospital with head injuries.

Police said Marcie Mommish of Aggie Village was injured when the car she was driving collided with a pickup driven by Floyd Finger at the intersection of 300 South and Main Street.

Officers said Mommish was turning right at the traffic light when Finger’s Toyota ran the red light and collided with Mommish’s driver’s-side door. She was treated by EMTs at the scene and transported by ambulance to Logan Regional Hospital.

Finger was arrested after officers at the crash smelled alcohol and found empty beer cans in his truck, police said. He also was cited for running a red light.

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NOTES: Barbershop (note: you may want to do something other than a straight summary lead here…)
There are already 17 barbershops and hairdressers in town. Today there’s one more. The new shop opens today. It’s called Keep Yer Head Down. The owner is 55. She's divorced. She moved to town from Las Vegas, NV. He name is Franceen Follicle. He left leg is slightly longer than her right. She has hired four stylists who wear go-go boots and dance to strobe lights and disco music while they cut hair. Franceen is a funny name. She used to be a Vegas show dancer who performed at the Mirage, Harrah’s and other major casinos. The shop has a green door. It is located at the corner of Center St. and 300 East, at 301 East Center Street. A good location. “It’s a fun ‘do’ to do,” Franceen says. “We offer cutting-edge style-a-go-go. Everything from perms to colors to pedicures and nails. Grooming is more beautiful to a beat.”

OK—so this isn’t much of a hard-news story. Sure, there’s news, but you can lighten it up a bit. The weird details (go-go boots and the disco theme), Franceen’s background and her colorful quotes give a pedestrian story about a store opening a little more interest. Right?

Haircut
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Former Las Vegas showgirl-turned-hairdresser Franceen Follicle is bringing a whole new style to a crowded haircare market in Logan—the disco ’do.

“Grooming is more beautiful to a beat,” said Follicle, whose new hairstyling salon, Keep Yer Head Down, opened its doors today.

The shop, at 301 E. Center St., offers hair stylists in go-go boots who cut hair and do perms while dancing to strobe lights and disco music.

“It’s a fun ‘do’ to do,” Follicle says. “We offer cutting-edge style-a-go-go. Everything from perms to colors to pedicures and nails.”

Follicle, who once performed as a dancer at Vegas hotels such as the Mirage and Harrah’s, is betting that her style will offer some competition to the 17 other barber shops and hair salons already in business in Logan.

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NOTES: Speaker (info from CVLS press release)
The Cache Valley League of Scrapbookers (CVLS) is pleased to announce a wonderful speaker from Detroit for its meeting. The speaker will be Clarice Clipper, a scrapbooking author and expert who is president of the International Scrapbooking Society (ISS). Ms. Clipper, 31, will speak on “Clipping with Clipper—Cutting out boredom while preserving precious memories.” Ms. Clipper has been making a wide variety of scrapbooks and memory volumes since 1992, when, as a young mother of 8 beautiful children, she started trying to organize her family memories. “They were driving me nuts,” she says, with a twinkle in her eye. “One day I realized that I couldn’t tell them apart. I could remember if it was Jeremy or Fanny who had the cleft palate. And who was the soccer star—Bobbie or Keith? And why did we name that one 'Elvis'? So scrapbooking started for me as self-protection, really, so I could keep track of them all!” Ms. Clipper has become an international spokeswoman for the Art of Scrapbooking as a means of bringing mothers of all races and creeds together in peace, to share memories and to bridge different cultures. Last year, she was honored with a special United Nations award for her work with women worldwide. Her talk will be on the third Wednesday of the month in the Logan City All-Purpose Room at 255 North Main Street. It starts at 7 p.m. and will be followed by a reception with punch and cookies. The public is welcome to come and enjoy “Clipping with Clipper.”

This is a deathly dull story, exactly the kind of stuff the lady PR person for the Scrapbooking Club would put in a press release. Is it worthless? Well, no. There is news here of small-town public interest, and it’s exactly the kind of stuff your editor will ask a cub reporter to turn into a brief for the “Around Town” or “Happenings” column. Whaddaya gonna do?

Scrapbook
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A Detroit mother of eight who turned scrapbooking into a global initiative for women will be the featured speaker at this month’s meeting of the Cache Valley League of Scrapbookers.

Clarice Clipper, president of the International Scrapbooking Society, will speak on “Clipping with Clipper—Cutting out boredom while preserving precious memories” on Oct. 17 at 7 p.m. in the Logan City Hall all-purpose room.

Last year, the United Nations honored Clipper with a special award for her work with women worldwide. She has promoted scrapbooking as a means of bridging cultures and bringing women of all nationalities together.

Clipper says she began scrapbooking in 1992 as a way of organizing her eight children.

“They were driving me nuts,” she said. “One day I realized that I couldn’t tell them apart. So scrapbooking started for me as self-protection, really, so I could keep track of them all.”

The speech and reception is free and open to the public.

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